Whispers of the Mind

Whispers of the Mind

A Poem by Rorenzu
"

Listen to what they have to tell you

"

 


"Whispers of the Mind"


I’m just nobody

Delicate as fragile glass

Yet ideals are high

Aiming to win your heart

 

Everyone thinks of me

Luminary as it seems to be

But deep lies the truth

I am nobody

 

Should I? Or should I not?

The words I want to express

May it not mischief

I desire but you don’t care

 

If only this mind can speak

How beautiful you are inside

I wouldn't mind at all

Say it, say it, just say it

 

We are not meant to be

Towering heights I cannot climb

Distance is too far

Separated by space and time

 

I waited so long

Your shadow never crosses mine

I guess this is hard for both

Let broken pieces shattered

 

If you only knew how I think of you

 

I secretly gaze back, you don’t mind

 

I surrender my faith and bury my love

 

Until I find another one, this is goodbye

© 2012 Rorenzu


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It is hard to want and be so far away. I like the way you wrote the poem. Allowing the reader to feel the different thoughts and emotions. The poem is sad. To give up and look for something else is a form of sadness. Good music and outstanding poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

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Pax
a hopeful start to a confused wonderings to a climatic distance till the last goodbye...
a great poem...sadness in depth...

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b.
so beautiful in it's poignancy, very lyrical, pensive, enriched with imagery of loneliness...of longing. great write, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rorenzu

6 Years Ago

thank you so much:)
Beautiful and so sad at the same time.

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Rorenzu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
wow pull on heartstrings, love this though.


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Rorenzu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
I LOVE sorrowful love stories. Honestly.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rorenzu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Lunette Lariz

6 Years Ago

My pleasure. :)
How very sad and lonely. well expressed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rorenzu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Very pretty and very sweet, yet somewhat sad as well.

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Rorenzu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
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Kes
This is very very good. :) Those thoughts that niggle away at night, that catch you off guard...
Fab.
K

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rorenzu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
This is so perfectly written, and I can relate to it which makes it even better :)x you have an incredible way of voicing feelings that even I have trouble writing about.

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Rorenzu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)

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