Feelings

Feelings washed away in the waves,

Carried over sea,

Just like a message,

Carried in a little bottle.

Travel far,

Travel wide,

Feelings don't always come back.

The search is at an end.

Feelings once strong,

Once over come with pride,

Now lost at sea,

Gone with the tide. 

Feelings washed away in the waves,

Carried over sea,

Buried away,

Deep in the sands of time. 

Reviews

[Rohan Tandon]

very relatable..... gr8 flow of poetry... nd the imagery is very clear and pretty amazing..... nd it strangely has a very soothing effect on me.... keep it up :)

[Rae]

Very nice. Quick and easy to relate to. Keep writing!!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love this a lot... with the feelings and the sea. You did so great in this write, from beginning to end, i love it. :)

[AndyJCash]

You have a cool thing going on with this poem, the symbolism of the sea and related things is great! Nice job.

[Marie Harrison]

I loved the ebb and flow of this feeling.
So true about feelings. We give them
away but at times they don't come
back, But we were alive because
we experienced these feelings.
Nice!