My Love

My Love

A Poem by Rose
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This is a poem of how I feel that the one person I truly love is so far, and that I can only see him during the holidays. Sorry if some of the wording isn't good, I couldn't find good rhyming words.

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Being stuck in my home
with nothing to fear,
but even though I'm alone,
I wish you were here.

To give me a hug,
when I need you the most.
To make me smile big,
when I hear you boast.

I love you,
with all my heart.
And it makes me upset,
to know we're apart.

I need a hug.
I need a smile.
I wish you were around,
to cuddle for a while.

You are my love,
my joy,
my happiness.
I'm glad to have you,
because if not,
I'm sure I'd be depressed.

© 2013 Rose


Author's Note

Rose
Sorry if there are any errors, but for this one poem, I don't really care. I just wanted to write this for someone who I love with my heart.

If anyone has better rhyming words for "happiness" and "most" please let me know.

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Really liked the poem. Also cool to see I'm not the only one writing stuff like this xD

Sorry, for I do not know better rhyming words. But that's mostly because I tend to write in spanish, as I feel more comfortable using it. Anyway, looking forward for more of your work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, but I don't tend to write much poems. I prefer to write lots of stories. The on.. read more
William

10 Years Ago

Oh, well I think your inspiration works pretty well. I also write when I get the right idea, which t.. read more
Rose

10 Years Ago

That's great, and thanks. I guess after all this time, I finally found the person who means the worl.. read more



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I can sense the need of the girl throughout the poem. The atmosphere felt, light, when I read this. Thanks for the poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

8 Years Ago

You're welcome and thanks for reviewing.
Thank.you for sharing this beautiful poem x

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

9 Years Ago

Welcomes and thanks as well.
I'm glad to have you,
because if not,
I'm sure I'd be depressed.
this a true love for whom you love most....very nice poem with lots of feelings....love it...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot and yeah, I love him with all my heart
Aww, this is so sweet, yet saddening due to the fact that the two of you are apart. I really hope it works out! What matters is that you seem madly in love, and that's what keeps the fire burning.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot ^///^ I know it's sad that we can't see each other as much as normal couples, but it do.. read more
Long distant relationships are the worst. :/ If you guys stay honest and loyal to eachother you'll be back together in no time. I didn't mind the parts that didn't rhyme. My fav part was:
'I need a hug.
I need a smile.
I wish you were around,
to cuddle for a while '
Thanks for the share :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

*Christmas
GorgEOus NiGhtMarE

10 Years Ago

Best kinda Christmas present you could get :p goodluck to you both :) he sounds like a lucky guy
Rose

10 Years Ago

He is, but I think I'm the lucky one.
Really liked the poem. Also cool to see I'm not the only one writing stuff like this xD

Sorry, for I do not know better rhyming words. But that's mostly because I tend to write in spanish, as I feel more comfortable using it. Anyway, looking forward for more of your work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, but I don't tend to write much poems. I prefer to write lots of stories. The on.. read more
William

10 Years Ago

Oh, well I think your inspiration works pretty well. I also write when I get the right idea, which t.. read more
Rose

10 Years Ago

That's great, and thanks. I guess after all this time, I finally found the person who means the worl.. read more
nice poem filled with emotions

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

Thanks very much
Sounds Lovely and it is okay that is doesn't rhyme at all

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot sis
I love it so emotional!! Sorry but I have no rhyming words either.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, and it's fine.
Aww! That's nice! also I have no words rhyming :/ that's why i don't write a lot of poems lawl.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose

10 Years Ago

I can tell lol, and thanks a lot.

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