The Sight
A Book by RoseTea
 This world has always hated witches, but some tried to make cohabitation work.
It didn't.
Covens scattered, bloodlines destroyed and those left in hiding, is there any hope?  © 2019 RoseTea
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Thank you for taking your time to read, but really only the very first draft. Please comment on what you think of story line so far. Are you left wanting to read more? Are the characters natural and believable? What are my initial weaknesses? Where do you see it going?
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wow !!!!! what a read, i couldn't stop until the last word.
i was racing through the sentences so fast that i had to re-read some of them again 'cos i missed part of the vivid & convincing events.
i normally don't read online stories because of the length, but your opening paragraph was inviting me to read on.
well done !!! .....5 stars
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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4 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind words. I have actually abandoned this plot for a while and focused o.. read moreThank you so much for your kind words. I have actually abandoned this plot for a while and focused on another but I shan’t be posting it here. However, I am always looking for people to read new material as I have a very good feeling about my current endeavour and so, if you’re a fan of my writing style, I would be happy to send over a few chapters and would of course love to hear your thoughts.
I am a world builder/fantasy writer with a great love for witches so I tend to stick to this theme at the moment.
Let me know if this interests you.
Have a good day!
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4 Years Ago
glad you liked my review. i would be happy to read the next chapter to this story if you get around .. read moreglad you liked my review. i would be happy to read the next chapter to this story if you get around to writing it.
but i'm definitely not into witches, Wicca, vampires, goblins or what i call 'sorcery sci-fi'. i don't want to read that style of stories or poems & then have those bloodthirsty thoughts or verbal scenes lingering on in my brain.
i'm into happier & fun poem writings, or poems about environmental or justice happenings that i want to lament about.
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4 Years Ago
I see. I misunderstood then as this piece I would say is rather horrific given the young girl has lo.. read moreI see. I misunderstood then as this piece I would say is rather horrific given the young girl has lost her parents. However, my witches are not blood thirsty or dark at all as I don’t believe witches to be this way. They are, in my interpretation, lovers of the earth all that is natural. But no matter- if I do write anymore of this piece, I will let you know.
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Reviews
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wow !!!!! what a read, i couldn't stop until the last word.
i was racing through the sentences so fast that i had to re-read some of them again 'cos i missed part of the vivid & convincing events.
i normally don't read online stories because of the length, but your opening paragraph was inviting me to read on.
well done !!! .....5 stars
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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4 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind words. I have actually abandoned this plot for a while and focused o.. read moreThank you so much for your kind words. I have actually abandoned this plot for a while and focused on another but I shan’t be posting it here. However, I am always looking for people to read new material as I have a very good feeling about my current endeavour and so, if you’re a fan of my writing style, I would be happy to send over a few chapters and would of course love to hear your thoughts.
I am a world builder/fantasy writer with a great love for witches so I tend to stick to this theme at the moment.
Let me know if this interests you.
Have a good day!
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4 Years Ago
glad you liked my review. i would be happy to read the next chapter to this story if you get around .. read moreglad you liked my review. i would be happy to read the next chapter to this story if you get around to writing it.
but i'm definitely not into witches, Wicca, vampires, goblins or what i call 'sorcery sci-fi'. i don't want to read that style of stories or poems & then have those bloodthirsty thoughts or verbal scenes lingering on in my brain.
i'm into happier & fun poem writings, or poems about environmental or justice happenings that i want to lament about.
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4 Years Ago
I see. I misunderstood then as this piece I would say is rather horrific given the young girl has lo.. read moreI see. I misunderstood then as this piece I would say is rather horrific given the young girl has lost her parents. However, my witches are not blood thirsty or dark at all as I don’t believe witches to be this way. They are, in my interpretation, lovers of the earth all that is natural. But no matter- if I do write anymore of this piece, I will let you know.
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