Tired

I'm so tired

 Tired of caring

 Tired of trying

 Tired of breathing

 Tired of lying

 I just don't have the energy to go on

 Turn off the music I'm tired of that song 

The effort it takes for my heart to beat 

Is lost in a crack between the concrete 

My will to survive is dwindling and dying 

This flower wants to wilt 

This star to stop shining 

My mind is a burden 

My arms and legs shake 

The rest of me is tired

 But my soul is awake 

"Live one more day 

Breath one more breath 

Be patient 

My friend 

You cannot rush Death"

Author's Note

The format is a bit weird, but that's because I posted this on my ipod

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Wonderful piece of writing and I'm sure many will relate to your work

[Lady Celery]

I love the way this poem flows, it has a great structure actually. Totally relatable as well, when I was reading it I knew the exact feeling. This is really nice work.