Who Am I?

Apparently people actually like these??? This is a poem I wrote when I was about 11, it's not very good at all, and it's unedited, but oh well!

If love is a magic

Then I am a wizard

If hate is a snowstorm

Then I am a blizzard

If tears are raindrops

Then I am a cloud

If beauty is quiet

Then like thunder, I'm loud

Author's Note

Am I using the right "than"?? Also, as I mentioned, I wrote this IN GRADE SIX, IT IS UNEDITED AND NOT VERY GOOD, PLEASE DO NOT LAUGH TOO HARD AT ME!! :P

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Powerful imagery! Great musicality! Simply fantastic! Well done!

[A. Amos]

This is really well done:) great work

[Rose Diamond]

Really? Haha, thanks! I'm thinking of adding on or editing it, but I'm not quite sure. What do you think?

[A. Amos]

What you created leave it or its up to you edit or play with it

[Rose Diamond]

Ok, thanks :)

[Shiranaixx]

This is great! Can't believe you wrote this in grade 6

[Rose Diamond]

Thank you! :D