Who Am I?

Who Am I?

A Poem by Rose Diamond
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Apparently people actually like these??? This is a poem I wrote when I was about 11, it's not very good at all, and it's unedited, but oh well!

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If love is a magic

Then I am a wizard
If hate is a snowstorm

Then I am a blizzard

If tears are raindrops
Then I am a cloud

If beauty is quiet

Then like thunder, I'm loud

© 2014 Rose Diamond


Author's Note

Rose Diamond
Am I using the right "than"?? Also, as I mentioned, I wrote this IN GRADE SIX, IT IS UNEDITED AND NOT VERY GOOD, PLEASE DO NOT LAUGH TOO HARD AT ME!! :P

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Powerful imagery! Great musicality! Simply fantastic! Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is really well done:) great work


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose Diamond

7 Years Ago

Ok, thanks :)
Shiranaixx

7 Years Ago

This is great! Can't believe you wrote this in grade 6
Rose Diamond

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :D

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Rose Diamond
Rose Diamond

Canada



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(Formerly Rosie-Chan) Hi there! My name is Rose, I'm 17, I love theatre, music, and literature, and I am a poet! I am literally the most inconsistent poet ever, but I'm ok I guess. more..

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