justa sitten in my truck

justa sitten in my truck

A Poem by Rossen
"

you're always on my mind

"
no more thinkin bout you
while I ride my tractor over things
fishin without bate
thinkin bout you
always late... gota get this miiiind straight
from tide to tide to tide... all you
kinda wonderful though...
just layin in the bed of my truck
daydreamin bout honey colored hair
and the look on your face every time
a flower opens its pretty little head...
yep...thinkin bout you now...

© 2014 Rossen


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Arf, arf, love it .. esp the idea of fishing without bait! But the best part is the way the poem swiftly shifts from a sort or resigned denial straight back into love dreamin'!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Rossen

6 Years Ago

Thank you,one of my favorites that somehow wrote itself..
This is so sweet and it follows along a thought as it changes. As much as we try our minds always go back to the ones we love.
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow - this is beautiful imagery and an emotive poem! To be so thoughtful of someone like this is touching! Beautiful hon! xx ♥

Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice, Rossen. What a very sweet, adorable poem. Love the imagery. It melts your heart. Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


i really like the dialect in this...a sweet love poem.
that very real kind.

Posted 7 Years Ago


  Rossen

7 Years Ago

Thank you, can't help but to break a few g's off now and then.
Funny how we say I am not thinking about something and then realize that at that second we are doing what we said we would not.You seem to be thinking about her all the way through lol.Great one my friend :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


  Rossen

7 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya, yes sometimes it's just to hard not to..
Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

I understand.You are welcome :)
Amazing how a 'thought' can stir an emotion dormant in the mind..as your mind wonders deep in though bringing back memories of a time when.... your thoughts were once a reality....

Loved your words penned wonderfully in this endearing poem Rossen...

YB


Posted 7 Years Ago


  Rossen

7 Years Ago

Why thank you YB, land here anytime ! I enjoy all of your words...
Yellow Butterfly

7 Years Ago

Your welcome Rossen and I enjoy all your works of art too on here... have a great day..

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  Rossen
Rossen

Sebastopol, CA



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