Dance With Me Darling

I saved this dance for you, and you alone.

Last night I dreamed we danced through time
Across a moonlit floor.
No music resounded, but still we danced
Forever hungry for more.
My heart to yours, we were as one,
An embrace so heavenly pure,
Silent, yet a thousand words were spoke
In eyes serene and sure.
Danced we did through the happiest hours
Where hurt does not abide.
Drunk with bliss, our souls we laid bare,
No more need to hide.
And still we danced through the heart of the storm,
Through pains unseen and deep.
But every tear I shed you caught
And softened the will to weep.
And now we dance through times of calm,
Our steps so light in time.
No sound compares to the music we make,
No happiness so sublime.
Last night I dreamed we danced through time
Through calm and stormy seas.
But this dance I never want to end,
So dance with me darling, please.

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Wow so beautiful...... what a dream , what a dance ... I love the Tempo of this , the flow of your words .... I could see ou dancing, wonderful

My heart to yours, we were as one,
An embrace so heavenly pure,
Silent, yet a thousand words were spoke
In eyes serene and sure.

[Pinkkatielyn]

This is one of the best things I have ever read. I can relate to this feeling, and I just love this. Amazing work

[Kaylor Mason]

That's one of the most beautiful, delicate fantasies I've ever heard. That is a dream I would never want to wake up from. Thank you for this poem :)

[Freckled Princess]

This poem... Outstanding. Simply outstanding. This is inspiring me to write. In fact, I'll write one right now. Thank you for this.
I am truly moved.
Imagery- brilliant
Tone- Amazing
Thoughts- Can't I read this again and again forever?

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very delightful and romantic poem. Life is a dance, for sure. We can only hope we dance a very good dance.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

kudos for this! i love your description the way you describe that feeling that almost everyone can relate to it...nice choice of words..you did a great job in this beautiful poem!:)