Secrets Of The Universe

Secrets Of The Universe

A Poem by Royal Phoenix
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a poem to my painting

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Unce upon a time the story of life had begun
It started from one: the God of this planet that we called the Sun
A loyal great helper appeared then soon
To us he is known simply as moon

The two have seen from the beginning
All mighty cultures rise and fall
But have you noticed the true meaning
Of most corrupt and greedy of them all?

If not please take a nice advice:
Just stand right out and look around
Then you will see to great surprise
Future is now not otherwise

The point I’d like to get across
Is filled with secrets of the universe
And first key word in trinity
Is infinity

© 2013 Royal Phoenix


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Lovely poem, i've never read such a master piece of art before ... I adore this poem. It's a combination of earthly powers on which the planet earth's alive. All the stanzas're very nice n in the IIIrd last stanza, I love your questioning to the greatest souls wandering around the world.
It's a creative poem, keep posting new stuffs. I've figured out that it's penned in 2013, hope to read your new stuffs soon before leaving the site.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is beautiful, the space imagery is really good. Nice work

Posted 6 Years Ago


the way is best,the rhyme is better,the technique is good, the feeling is excellent,highly decorated with imagination well this is very beautiful collection of lines

Posted 6 Years Ago


Your third stanza points out a pretty interesting thought. I also enjoyed the rhyming that you did.
Aside from your poem, your painting is very cool. Its very busy with a lot of colors to hold my attention. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ohh I was mind boggled by your piece here, A real inspirational write my dear poetess friend :) very well done :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great write!!! I enjoyed reading it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Making sense to me honestly and your ideas flow like a waterfall in this poem. Nice imagery in this sensational piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Interesting thoughts nicely put together.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Tags: Secrets Of The Universe, dragons, phoenix, whale, butterfly, dream, surreal, mysticism, agate, pyramids, knowledge, painting, new age

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Royal Phoenix
Royal Phoenix

Seattle, WA



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I am an artist within and throughout of my being. I work in different mediums like photography, painting, crafting and poetry. I like to interconnect them, creating my own unique style of art. Bein.. more..

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A Poem by Royal Phoenix