A Poem by RxQueen

Coping mechanisms we build.

When the darkness hits
I can only dream of you
The love we shared
The love we lost
I carry your burdens upon my shoulders
As if I have none to bear
I am tormented by face
I am tormented by your fears
I had hoped that during these dark days
You would hold me
Be my relief
Instead you left me with this darkness
You betrayed me with your lies
But I swore I'd be yours
And now I'm trapped in this life

© 2017 RxQueen

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wow... this is very sad yet so amazing at the same time.

well written, great work honestly!

Posted 1 Year Ago

This is a sad and heart breaking poem. But it is beautifully written. You are great at expressing emotions through your writing.

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1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. I appreciate it!
beautifully written! I couldn't have worded any emotion as well as you did here! Wonderful job, dear.

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1 Year Ago

I truly value your feedback, thank you!
How very sad. When you pin your hopes on someone and then they let you down, it is difficult to get over it. Honest emotions expressed well. Lydi**

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1 Year Ago

Thank you! I am grateful for you reading my work.

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Added on October 15, 2017
Last Updated on October 15, 2017
Tags: depression, loyalty, sadness, love, love lost




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