Peace to the Poor

The struggle

The dream

A lie

It seems

The greedy

The poor

The rich,

and their law

The honest

The brave

Unknowingly slaves

The victims

The hurt,

find peace in the dirt

Reviews

[MOON]

With one or two lines you found such rhythym. The message powerful too.

[E. Ryan Miller]

"peace in the dirt". I like it. The way your lines are short and staccato lends itself to your theme. Your tone, also, is interesting. Sober yet ironically witty. Good stuff.