Loneliness

Loneliness of a love sick; poetic style Acrostic.

Loving you gave me the meaning of life,

Only you made me felt alive;

Now you left me alone,

Embrace of your memories will keep me alive.

Reviews

[Connie MaryN]

Very sad but beautiful. I like this part"Embrace of your memories will keep me alive."a very good meaningful acroustic.

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Thank you for stopping by:)

[Autonomous]

Another great poem but in line two "Only you made felt alive" doesn't really fit together, it could be better read as "Only you make me feel alive." or "Only with you, I felt alive." I could be wrong but either way it is still a great poem.

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

Thanks, now it makes sense, one of my persisting problem hand and mind not in coordination, often miss out words while typing and I hate proof reading. :)

[Adesanya Yewande]

I love the style of this poem,the first letter of each line form the word LONE,and the emotion of the writer potray loneliness,great work friend

[Shankar Mohan Singh]

I appreciate your time and the encouragement, this substandard at the moment but you need to keep writing in order to go far.

[Adesanya Yewande]

Thanks friend,am working on that