Quicksand

Quicksand

A Poem by S1lentK1ng
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Sometimes you can't get through life on your own ..

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I walked into you without trying ... Now I cant escape you ... Why did I have to run into you ... You hold onto me and dont let me go ... You keep engulfing me ... The more I fight back the more you get a grip on me ... Thats an unfair choice you force me to decide ... To fight and get taken fast, or to just give up and get slowly digested by you .... I chose the slow way ... Not because I give up .. But because it gives me more time ... The only way I can escape you is if someone rescues me from your clutches ... so im waiting, slowly being swallowed by the darkness ... All thats left is my hand waiting above the suface , hoplessly waiting for someone to pull me out ... I still have time ... Please ... Someone ... I need help ... Dont let me drown in this darkness ....
In this quicksand ...

© 2013 S1lentK1ng


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Thank you .

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deep write and full of emotion..I love this write

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on March 27, 2013
Last Updated on March 31, 2013
Tags: Quicksand, sand, trapped, hope, hopeless, drowning, lonleyness, alone, help, cant get through life, darkness