VAGUE

she never turns around to see me....

  VAGUE

It was always vague

Your presence in my dream

The beautiful clad woman in white;

It was vague though

Was it my delusion or was it fog that did it?

In the midst of the mist you look beautiful thou!!!

 

Author's Note

just a random one.....please feel free to review it!!!!

Reviews

[Latifa]

I love it , so vivid and nicely penned.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thanks for the review latifa!! Have a nice day

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful poem and imagery you have penned...:)........................

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thank you Sami..

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Rehan Roy]

Our perception in dream is reflection of the reflection done in reality. It may seem vague, behind the curtain of consciousness. But,she is there, somewhere; as eyes of the heart can see both the seen and the unseen, penetrating the realm of consciousness and subconsciousness, thus conjuring an image of the beloved. You have written wonderful lines.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thanks a lot Rehan!!!!! This will help me to write better

[Saddam]

Beautiful poem. For her, this is splendid line of love.
You're create it nicely my friend.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

thank you saad..thats so nice of you!!

[SAYED THANGAL]

very good lines, highly imaginative

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thank you sir.

[Avinash]

I will call it subconscious poem which transcended from the deep of your minds

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

yeah...you can say so...thanks for reading Avinash.

[DIVYA]

Beautiful dreams are meant to be cherished and enjoyed. Why wonder? :)
I loved the beautiful picture you created here.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Thanks for reading Divya...

[DIVYA]

You are welcome Sandeep!