Part Two: What is your motive?

Part Two: What is your motive?

A Poem by satanic666

the next part of the series.


Part Two:

What is your motive?  


As a man of logic this perplexes me

All of the reasons that one would need to leave 

Just arent true with you and me 

Thus i am led to ask  


What is your motive?  


I never hit you

I never forgot you

I never went without you

I never left you


I always said i loved you

My actions always portraid it

I always put you first 

Just ask my freinds theyll tell you. 


You did hit me

You did forget me

You did leave me

So i must ask with all the facts presented... 


What is your motive?




© 2008 satanic666

Author's Note

same thing opinions and comments not grammar teachers.

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her motive is to be in a relationship with someone who treats her right and fufills her, that person isnt you and never will be so for our sake GET OVER IT it will be a year november 26 its time to let go, and in your writing "her" dont you ever think about calling me a pothead druggy stoner who has no money or a job or a future because it sounds a lot like your brother

Posted 14 Years Ago

this is a good follow up to the last is blind, and here in this poem, your tone proves that love is decieving...

Posted 14 Years Ago

The common perplexity of do well to potray the relationship objectively and also, you keep it with a curious tone as opposed to a bitter one. Good job on that, it was a great extension on your last poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on June 16, 2008
Last Updated on October 16, 2008



hatteras, NC

my name is jordan clarke and im a 17 year old devout satanist that has given up on love. mostly i write about love that was lost and will never be found again and i write for those that have been wro.. more..


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