Im Not Sympathetic

Im Not Sympathetic

A Poem by satanic666

For all the losers who never tried or cared.


Im Not Sympathetic  



For all you losers out there

for all the ones who never cared

for all the ones who didnt do their best

The only thing i have to say is....


Im Not Sympathetic.


You expect everything for nothing

you are a prideless breed

your efforts arent forethcoming

Your life is sad indeed   


Once again, Im Not Sympathetic  


You will waste away

as you try to bring everyone down

For in the end your laziness will be your undoing

And your life will be a living hell  


Im becoming apathetic  


While you rot I, along with others shall succeed

you will despise the day you didnt care  

you will hate the life that you failed 

for you all we can say is....   


Not only are we not Sympathetic  


But we have become Apathetic! 



© 2008 satanic666

Author's Note

we have become apathetic towards their existance.

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I feel like starting a riot with you after reading this. People take so much for granted now a days. Even life in general is taken for granted. And freedom too! Sickens me. The world is going to Hell. lol. Good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You become apathitic toward those who just try to bring you down as well. Ones who you know you can't trust, it becomes obvious, and yet the try so hard decieve you by using the dreaded F word (Friend). Damn F word, very well writen, nicely expressed.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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I enjoyed this piece.

Thank you for sharing. I love the feeling and the flow.


Posted 12 Years Ago

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I like it. Sounds a lot like how I feel about people.

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Added on July 23, 2008



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