MISSING HEAD

MISSING HEAD

A Poem by SHEEMA HUQ
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My head felt like it had been took.

A worn and tattered old book.

Loose pages found in a nook.

Pecked and examined by a Rook.

An overburdened coat hook.

Banged about, twisted and shook.

Washed and deseeded, ready to cook.

My head felt like it had been took.

 

© 2013 SHEEMA HUQ


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SHEEMA HUQ
picture: Untitled by Andy Vibile

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:) enjoyed this read....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

Hello, thanks for commenting :)
As Frieda would say "And I don't give a fook" xD This was really clever...thanks for penning this quirky write...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This felt like the beginning of a song, like someone in a musical about to sing about going crazy lol. Another great on Sheema!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

I personally like this one, it is nice to post light-hearted trivia to break up the general monotony.. read more
I dig how you take the words and just run with them to see where they end up. Has a Lewis Caroll feel about it. I might have to give it a go. I could do with a bit of nonsense. Thank you for the inspiration!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

Oh you humble me dear Lee, you are Lee Edward right? I am looking foward to reading your masterpiece.. read more
L.Edward

10 Years Ago

Your welcome. Thank you for your kind words.
Didn't you know where to look?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

I think that the two reamining words of this rhyme scheme were, 'look' and 'stook', thanks for peeri.. read more
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Pax
wow ~ the rhyming is pretty great... i love it... it dances in my tongue as i read it out loud... now i felt like my head had been took..;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

Hey Pax, I really appreciate your review
I really enjoy how the rhyme carries through the transformations of the story, and for whatever my feelings on it is worth, I find it well made and worthy of the triple-read;

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

such a compliment, thanks kindly David, I feel blessed tonight :)
Naw, you're just hungry....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

promise, I'm not
mono rhyme is one of the most difficult structures (imo) to make work in the English language, compared to an Eastern language, such as Arabic, where mono rhyme would be music in words...but you've done well to make the case of the lost head :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

thanks so very much, nice to meet you, I do admire your worldy poetic knowledge :)
Wondering Mind

10 Years Ago

you're welcome, a pleasure to meet you too, and I'm hardly knowledgable, or worldly..I haven't writt.. read more
Not a fan of rhyming poetry unless subtle. This is a good attempt to describe feeling that you have been left stunned but it lost its pathos to me through the needless rhyme.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SHEEMA HUQ

10 Years Ago

I am a rhyming freak! regardless, thanks

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SHEEMA HUQ
SHEEMA HUQ

LONDON , ENGLAND, United Kingdom



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