HEAVEN KNOWS

It's good to expose our inlaid selves...

Hatred enthrones envy within,
Envy that's concealed in his grin,
A serpent in the grass so green,
Venom rests in the mouth deemed clean,
Errors in him though not seen,
Never miss the eye of one in Heaven.

Heaven knows his art,
Echoes of flaws are muffled in his heart,
Afar off from his innocent chit chat,
Vilifying him isn't 'all that phat',
Everyone adores his zeal and tact,
Not in heaven...his worth is synonym to dirt.
                              Sinde

Reviews

[Art]

nice work...the character of each individual though individualistic...is immersed within the scope of society...it is left to each one to see themselves and find that path of a rightious mind...all is visible from one in Heaven...nicely expressed thought...

[Linear]

I Realy like the format you use.
Its hard to be critical of ourselves, yet its What we all need to do from time to time. Well done

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Beautifuly done!there's alot i like here ...everyone adores his zeal and tact,not in heaven..his worth is synonym to dirt..great end to great piece

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

wow!
great work bro, the poetry is worthy of the acronym. some gorgeous lines in there too like
'Errors in him though not seen,
Never miss the eye of one in Heaven.'
i wont forget that.
"Everyone adores his zeal and tact,
Not in heaven...his worth is synonym to dirt."
great work,keep writing bro

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Great!