ROIZEDON...

ROIZEDON...

A Poem by SINDE
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A thought at sunset...

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The sun-lit void spread out like a veil


Hides in its background a secret assail


Darkness shall pour out ; "The end!" all shall wail...


                        -Sindednis                        


© 2011 SINDE


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Well done. Screams to be read aloud!

Posted 9 Years Ago


sounds apocalyptic. for some reason the length of the poem makes it sinister. also makes one's imagination run.

Posted 9 Years Ago


great poem. i perceived it as the end of the world because of the "the end" part :)
Thumbs up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What is insight when
there is nothing in sight to
obstruct the unseen...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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short and concise..you have conveyed that magical moment in all it's intensity exquisitely..and I love the reference to the veil. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just three lines..and yet it speaks volumes..amazing ! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well written,good poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


hope this never happens...but a wonderful haiku...

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this modern haiku sinde. Well written. Good words and picturising the nature's gift.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I hope this doesnt happen to me But Iwant to go out under a falling star

Posted 9 Years Ago



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SINDE
SINDE

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