An ode to a dejected friend!

An inspiring poem to a friend who is disinterested in life because she encounters failure!

Dear melancholic friend,

When you lose in life, do not lose the 'winning' flavour,

As the waves lost are not lost forever,

They do come back with their original fervour,

 

Afterall, it's the fall from a great height,

that renders water full of delight,

So, pick up your spirits and pace,

Strike back right in the face!

 

Don't care about what others might say,

It's ultimately "YOUR" game, not their's to play,

Fathom the meaning of your inner soul,

Enhance your capabilities, justify your role,

 

Awaken your dreams, carve them into reality,

Chisel your name and magnify your personality,

Onto the dias of a competition called life,

For this is the reason for people's strife!

 

Let me take leave of this note with a note itself:

When in the game, fasten up your lace,

And show the world your worth,

let them admire your grace!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[R Smith]

keep it positive, turn those negatives into useful things of worth and be happy, well written :)

[Mai L Nissen]

It is a very encouraging poem - definitely needed in these times :) I liked reading it!

I particularly liked this bit, the imagery gives a feel of this happening in real time:
"Awaken your dreams, carve them into reality,

Chisel your name and magnify your personality,

Onto the dias of a competition called life,

For this is the reason for people's strife!"

Thank you for sharing, Samhitha!

[Samhitha Mopati]

:) pleasure

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I really like this piece. It's very uplifting and inspirational.
If I were very down, this would certainly help!
Great flow!
Fantastic job!!

[Samhitha Mopati]

thanks! :)

[AaronFreitas]

A very good write with good flow and a good rhyming scheme. I enjoyed reading this piece... thanks for sharing!

[Samhitha Mopati]

my pleasure...:)

[nazia]

Very well constructed... Great work

[Samhitha Mopati]

Thank you :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Smooth flow and interesting rhymes (no redundancies or overrated-ness here, bravo!). The message you are conveying is full of depth and wisdom; is timeless and universal. This brings hope, optimism, determination, perseverance. Wonderful job!

[Samhitha Mopati]

Thank you very much:)

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

This is a really simple, yet brilliant piece. It is motivating not just for the ''dejected friend'' it is dedicated to but to everyone out there who's dejected. Keep up your work of spreading smiles and touching hearts. You're doing it pretty well. :)

[Samhitha Mopati]

Thank you Bushra! :)

[Bushra Naqshbandi]

This is a really simple, yet brilliant piece. It is motivating not just for the ''dejected friend'' it is dedicated to but to everyone out there who's dejected. Keep up your work of spreading smiles and touching hearts. You're doing it pretty well. :)

[GreenEyedPoet]

Great piece hun, I enjoyed reading it. :)

[Samhitha Mopati]

Thanks GreenEyedPoet! :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"Fathom the meaning of your inner soul,

Enhance your capabilities, justify your role,

Awaken your dreams, carve them into reality,

Chisel your name and magnify your personality"....Inspiring lines.... a good write overall

[Samhitha Mopati]

Thanks! :) Do review my other poems as well..Even critical comments will be adhered to..! :D
























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