An ode to a dejected friend!

An ode to a dejected friend!

A Poem by Samhitha Mopati
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An inspiring poem to a friend who is disinterested in life because she encounters failure!

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Dear melancholic friend,


When you lose in life, do not lose the 'winning' flavour,


As the waves lost are not lost forever,


They do come back with their original fervour,

 

Afterall, it's the fall from a great height,

that renders water full of delight,

So, pick up your spirits and pace,

Strike back right in the face!

 

Don't care about what others might say,

It's ultimately "YOUR" game, not their's to play,

Fathom the meaning of your inner soul,

Enhance your capabilities, justify your role,

 

Awaken your dreams, carve them into reality,

Chisel your name and magnify your personality,

Onto the dias of a competition called life,

For this is the reason for people's strife!

 

Let me take leave of this note with a note itself:

When in the game, fasten up your lace,

And show the world your worth,

let them admire your grace!

© 2015 Samhitha Mopati


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keep it positive, turn those negatives into useful things of worth and be happy, well written :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


It is a very encouraging poem - definitely needed in these times :) I liked reading it!

I particularly liked this bit, the imagery gives a feel of this happening in real time:
"Awaken your dreams, carve them into reality,

Chisel your name and magnify your personality,

Onto the dias of a competition called life,

For this is the reason for people's strife!"

Thank you for sharing, Samhitha!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

:) pleasure
I really like this piece. It's very uplifting and inspirational.
If I were very down, this would certainly help!
Great flow!
Fantastic job!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

thanks! :)
A very good write with good flow and a good rhyming scheme. I enjoyed reading this piece... thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

my pleasure...:)
Very well constructed... Great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Smooth flow and interesting rhymes (no redundancies or overrated-ness here, bravo!). The message you are conveying is full of depth and wisdom; is timeless and universal. This brings hope, optimism, determination, perseverance. Wonderful job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much:)
This is a really simple, yet brilliant piece. It is motivating not just for the ''dejected friend'' it is dedicated to but to everyone out there who's dejected. Keep up your work of spreading smiles and touching hearts. You're doing it pretty well. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

Thank you Bushra! :)
This is a really simple, yet brilliant piece. It is motivating not just for the ''dejected friend'' it is dedicated to but to everyone out there who's dejected. Keep up your work of spreading smiles and touching hearts. You're doing it pretty well. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great piece hun, I enjoyed reading it. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

Thanks GreenEyedPoet! :)
"Fathom the meaning of your inner soul,

Enhance your capabilities, justify your role,

Awaken your dreams, carve them into reality,

Chisel your name and magnify your personality"....Inspiring lines.... a good write overall

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

Thanks! :) Do review my other poems as well..Even critical comments will be adhered to..! :D
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Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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A girl with a generous and dwindling soul, attempting to speak my heart out to the world. I'm enamoured by people and their behavior and often dedicate my poems and articles to them. I'm seventeen ye.. more..

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