REJUVENATION

REJUVENATION

A Poem by Samhitha Mopati
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What is bound to occur will occur and nature will definitely take revenge!

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O modest nature,
So generous you have been,
the vivaciousness that you feature,
Generations have seen!
When the trees you bore 
were slaughtered, rendered fruitless,
Ruthlessly by we dreaded humans,
You just stuck to your peaceful core,
Standing tall, paying no heed to the mess!
When your holy land was drilled,
Marred and exploited,
for unimaginably wicked deeds,
In the name of exploration,
All you did was to wait,
Wait for recuperation,
With utmost patience!
Dear Mother Earth,
Don't you fret!
Ignorance will pay,
We humans will have to sweat,
Today, tomorrow or some other day,
Crowned and enthroned thou shall be,
As it's nature's own policy,
To restore what is oppressed,
And that day shall be celebrated,
As the day of REJUVENATION!

© 2015 Samhitha Mopati


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Two invites in one day you seem like an "eager beaver". Another discrete poem -- I think you have intenteded to be a Quatrain a-b-a-b with female rhymes (seen - been) but then it then changed to (bore and core) and then it seemed to have freed itself only to come back to a rhyming scheme in the latter parts of the writings.

Having just commented on another writing you seem intent on exploiting all the possibilities that punctuation offers, but also disregarding its boundaries -- so when it seems convinient to you sort of thing. I think the agreement is that if you are to follow puntuation then the comma will be an indentation and the next word should follow with a capital. In terms of theme, you seem to want to point to the ongoing saga which is coexistence and coethreatened. We inhabit a space which is not ours yet we disrespect and we forget innevitably leading to our demise. As for the optimism shown in the ending part of the writing, I can only adhere and hope that indeed we find a way through.

It will take long to continue with the unravelling of the writing, but I saw stanzas and I saw a thread in each one, I saw the potential of a more planned rhyme and maybe even a suggestion in terms of theme of how do you envision that we may regain a little respect so the Theme gains weight and not a levity which seems only based in hope. Sorry I wish I could go more into it, but I don't have anymore time.

Thank you for your invites...



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Two invites in one day you seem like an "eager beaver". Another discrete poem -- I think you have intenteded to be a Quatrain a-b-a-b with female rhymes (seen - been) but then it then changed to (bore and core) and then it seemed to have freed itself only to come back to a rhyming scheme in the latter parts of the writings.

Having just commented on another writing you seem intent on exploiting all the possibilities that punctuation offers, but also disregarding its boundaries -- so when it seems convinient to you sort of thing. I think the agreement is that if you are to follow puntuation then the comma will be an indentation and the next word should follow with a capital. In terms of theme, you seem to want to point to the ongoing saga which is coexistence and coethreatened. We inhabit a space which is not ours yet we disrespect and we forget innevitably leading to our demise. As for the optimism shown in the ending part of the writing, I can only adhere and hope that indeed we find a way through.

It will take long to continue with the unravelling of the writing, but I saw stanzas and I saw a thread in each one, I saw the potential of a more planned rhyme and maybe even a suggestion in terms of theme of how do you envision that we may regain a little respect so the Theme gains weight and not a levity which seems only based in hope. Sorry I wish I could go more into it, but I don't have anymore time.

Thank you for your invites...



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree.
"Ignorance will pay,
We humans will have to sweat,
Today, tomorrow or some other day,
Crowned and enthroned thou shall be,"
Nature will outlive man. I saw once burn forest rebirth in a few years. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fantastic!
Nature has indeed become our beast of burden.
A terrible thing to do to such a majestic gift.


Posted 9 Years Ago


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Samhitha Mopati

9 Years Ago

Thank you! :)










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Never play with nature..they say...it will balance everything.... we saw that in Himalayan Sunami... the way mountains are being cut.... the nature will hit back... I am afraid.... the balance has to be maintained.... good poem...good message in it....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is extremely eye opening :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem! Very well written my friend! I love it, esply the closing lines were awesome! Thanks for sharing!
-Anjana

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samhitha Mopati

9 Years Ago

Thank you for being so generous friend ! :)

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Samhitha Mopati
Samhitha Mopati

Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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A girl with a generous and dwindling soul, attempting to speak my heart out to the world. I'm enamoured by people and their behavior and often dedicate my poems and articles to them. I'm seventeen ye.. more..

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