Yours and yours forever!

Yours and yours forever!

A Poem by Samhitha Mopati
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A young girl who has been rejected and cheated in love, vents out her sorrow to her one-sided lover! car games with upgrades

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Wish I could come back to you,
So we could start life anew!
I promise I'd love you more,
More than ever before!
Wish the memories we cherished,
had never gotten perished,
Wish the girl I saw you with,
Was just an illusion or a myth...
Wish things were just the same,
As when you joined yours with my name!
What mistake have I committed to thee?
That such grief you throw upon me?
To this day dear, I regret,
For having let you go, I fret...
Please let me be yours again,
Forever the love of my life you shall remain!

© 2015 Samhitha Mopati


Author's Note

Samhitha Mopati
I've written this poem imagining myself as the young girl! I've tried my best to feel her emotions and tears! I would be obliged if you feel her pain through the little poet in me...























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Few second chances.
"To this day dear, I regret,
For having let you go, I fret...
Please let me be yours again,
Forever the love of my life you shall remain!"
Regret and sadness teach us to be more kind when love appeared again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great flow and rhyming! I felt the emotions and imagined the couple but it wasn't overwhelming. Great, sweet write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


The poem clearly indicates pain and the desire of the young girl who wants him back. It has been beautifully written Samhitha. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


certainly a sad poem, the regret is tangible and the loss brings out the pain of heartache, you rhyme very well and create a lovely flow, bravo :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


a good try if not heart felt. Though I wont wish anyone goes through such darkness. Many thanks for sharing. Could feel the fret and pain.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good one samhitha! I could feel the emotions in the writing. It's lucid and intense(y)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sad poem, to which I am sure we all can relate.
Nice flow and rhyming scheme. Though, as a student of religion, I am not so found of the usage of 'myth'. I understand what you mean, but it also seems like a choice based on finding something that rhymes with 'with'... This is of course just a personal opinion :)

Thanks for sharing, keep at it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very good write... I like the way you structured your thoughts in this piece. I definitely could feel the desperation in her plea's to her love... she would do anything to have his love again. Awesome descriptions... I really enjoyed this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A really beautiful poem. The pain and regret are clearly visible as well as the longing for reunion. Good job! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


i dont know the person who ran in ur mind while writing....but sure he is lucky!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Samhitha Mopati

7 Years Ago

Haha..Thanks Shiva! :D
Few second chances.
"To this day dear, I regret,
For having let you go, I fret...
Please let me be yours again,
Forever the love of my life you shall remain!"
Regret and sadness teach us to be more kind when love appeared again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hyderabad, Telangana, India



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A girl with a generous and dwindling soul, attempting to speak my heart out to the world. I'm enamoured by people and their behavior and often dedicate my poems and articles to them. I'm seventeen ye.. more..

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