Everyone is busy

Everyone is busy

A Poem by SUGATA M

 

When you are restless and dim

When you tend to fly high,

My sweet lazy crazy soul

Swaying across the sky.

 

Your shameless painless surrender of freedom

That is now mine,

Let me swallow part of your venom

Let me shed some more of those sunshine.

 

When you count your fruits of life

At the solitude path of thee,

Before breaking your soul into pieces, dear friend

For once, do remember me.

© 2012 SUGATA M


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Whoa! heavy but breathtaking.
Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


When you count your fruits of life
At the solitude path of thee,
Before breaking your soul into pieces, dear friend
For once, do remember me.

Excellent write :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


ooh! i like this a lot!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem puts me in a very dark place and happy place at the same time. I love your choice of words. Very lovely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very nice poem. A couple of lines need slight grammatical changes but otherwise, I really enjoyed this. Lovely ending too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nyc one man.
Before breaking your soul into pieces, dear friend
For once, do remember me.
perfect way to end.




Posted 12 Years Ago


honest work..nice..

Posted 12 Years Ago


When you count your fruits of life

At the solitude path of thee,

Before breaking your soul into pieces, dear friend

For once, do remember me.


Very nice to read. Best lines with appropriate wordings. It gives manifolded thinking. With regards.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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