DREADNOUGHT

DREADNOUGHT

A Chapter by STAR CHILD

DREADNOUGHT
Dark legions are gathering
Rising from the depths
Embracing those that get too close
A power they have
Darkness shrouds them
Never ending fear
Oh what a fright
Unleashing its terror
Grabbing the innocence
Holding them in the grip of fear
Taking deep in the shadows
Allen Hollandsworth
"7/12/11


© 2012 STAR CHILD


Author's Note

STAR CHILD
did this for school time
SCHOOL TIME GROUP WORD OF THE WEEK
this week's word is
dreadnoughtDRED-nawt




noun

1 :
a warm garment of thick cloth; also : the cloth

2 :
battleship

3 :
one that is among the largest or most powerful of its kind

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interesting write, i like the last 2 lines, nice

Posted 9 Years Ago


When I read this poem it makes me think about how depression can take a person into this kind of state of mind, fright, terror and darkness. I battled this demon once and was able to overcome.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good. Keep on penning.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful. great job and keep writing! (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deep STAR CHILD, deep. WINNER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully done! I like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cool poem enjoyed it a lot!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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