Vision of Love

Vision of Love

A Poem by RHEA CROSLEY
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The spirit of a lover now on the other side sends a vision to the past beloved.

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Memories of love now dance across my mind.

A solace of spirit and emotional wine.

 

Intoxicated by her memory mingled with new possibilities.

She says to me go forward for love has opened up a path of intrinsic intragencies.

 

What peaceful adventure does now entice me?

Where am I headed on this delightful voyage with what entity?

 

Is that snow now falling on a summer night?

No it's feathers of the Angels now in loves flight.

 

I can see ahead and there she stands wrapped in beautiful pastel light.

She holds keys in her hand and majestically she shines in the starry night.

 

This my first vision of my love to be.

The one that God is preparing for me.

 

And will the Angels sing?

Will the church bells ring?

 

Gently now I ember off to sleep.

Now with a vision of love to keep.

 

Copyright Rhea Crosley 06/27/2008

 

© 2008 RHEA CROSLEY


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I can see ahead and there she stands wrapped in beautiful pastel light.

She holds keys in her hand and majestically she shines in the starry night. ----- mmmh vision of love how allegoric... how uplifting and hopeful. To me this poem is also a joy of announcing of fallling in love...I liked very much!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can see ahead and there she stands wrapped in beautiful pastel light.

She holds keys in her hand and majestically she shines in the starry night. ----- mmmh vision of love how allegoric... how uplifting and hopeful. To me this poem is also a joy of announcing of fallling in love...I liked very much!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A most lovely and soft flowing verse here ~so Beautifully penned~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Subtle passionate undertones, very loving memories - all interwoven together. Great write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Same title as one of my favorite songs, "Vision of love" by mariah carey.

Oh, how dreamy! really shows how in touch with your emotions you really are. I am sure that once that woman in your dreams finds you she will be blessed, you will treat her with the upmost respect. i really liked this piece.

thanks for sharing it.

your cafe friend...kena

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"where am I headed on this delightful voyage with what entity"?
In my long, illustrious journey full of peaks and pitfalls I have learned that life is about perfect timing, harmony and balance. When you are ready the teacher will arrive, when you are prepared the gift will come. Never doubt, just be ready to say yes and to receive.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece had a nice flow and the meaning behind it was very heartfelt!

I think you have a beautiful piece here and I greatly appreciated you sharing it!

Nice write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea,

this is a beautiful write full of love and hope.
I had previously reviewed it and realized
when I re-read it that my words didn't seem
appropriate, so I'm re-doing.

I think love remains with us always,
in one form or another, whether it
be memories from old love or moments
with new..

This is a lovely heartfelt piece.
As always, beautifully penned by you my friend :)
Thank you for sharing it with us.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So very nicely wrapped within the sweet memories
heart embraces them so dearly, as it is quite evident in this piece!
Thank you for sharing your heart full of memories..sweet memories!
Done very wonderfully!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful take on eternal life Rhea and a vision of hope that entices the reader to believe in something bigger than us li'l ole' humans...we are so small in the scheme of things. I think 'angle' is meant to be 'angel?'
Now I 'amber?' not sure what you meant by that...amble?
Nice flow and diversion of stanzas.
Cheers,
Helen :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

"I can see ahead and there she stands wrapped in beautiful pastel light.
She holds keys in her hand and majestically she shines in the starry night." I like these lines right here, this is a most beautiful and inspiring write, wonderfully written.



Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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RHEA CROSLEY

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