Eternity's Edge

Eternity's Edge

A Poem by RHEA CROSLEY
"

This piece is a gift from Heaven.

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My wife passed away and went to Heaven and I believe she sent me this vision.  It was what she first saw.


My mind has stretched out to the edges of eternity.
There is no way back now.
Too caught up in all that eternal flow.
Here is light and color in words.
Even thoughts come as rainbows and three dimensional feeling. It is so wonderful I just can not say with earthly words. Tears of joy drop like rain from my face.

This must be the outer edges where God dwells
I have shivers of joy throughout my body my skin tingles with excitement there is an overwhelming euphoria of love and beauty that defies the grandest imagination .

How can I return or should I,
I see now there they are. WOW! Thousand; no tens of thousand of angels.
They are lit up like- like oh so grand so wonderful where are words that reach so high.
If I do not make it back its OK.
 I hope you will join me.
P.S. Death is not so bad when you know "the one who inhabits eternity."

Copyright Rhea Crosley

© 2008 RHEA CROSLEY


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Rhea, this is it!!
Eternity..
Wow... !!
It seems everywhere I
turn today, this is
what I'm reading about...
eternity, Heaven, love...
eternal love

This is gorgeous!
I can't read
it enough...
It brings me peace
within.

As I'm sure it has you my friend.

Thank you!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is great.
Love the message.
Are you ready?
in deed!!
great job brother

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kal
man!!!
god bless you!
very passionate!!!!
i dont know wt to say... i really dont... i mean it's so honest!
very beautiful!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have no idea of how this helped me Rhea...that is all I wish to say...
Wonderful, thank you.
Helen :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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pal
"How can I return or should I, "

No certainly not. True heaven is beyond mind and the realities of this so called world. You are blessed.

pal

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A wonderfully compassionate composition, revealing the reflections of your heart. The rainbow imagery, reminded me of the covenant of promise, made between God and man. True faith and convection assures your reunion with that special loved one, in one of those many rooms, reserved for those who believe.

God's Blessing
Phill(ozofee

Posted 16 Years Ago


Tears of joy drop like rain from my face.

Very beautifully written...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely and heavenly inspirational vision to be sure ~

well expressed and nicely penned~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An experience we all hope to have one day. Thanks for giving us a peek, Rhea.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, very emotional and touching. What is it with all these profound and teary-eyed poems today? every poem i reviewed has moved me today. This one is no different.

I agree. There are many angels beyond the veil. Waiting for their loved ones to come. It will be a beautiful thing! And your wife will be looking down on you as your guardian angel.

thanks for sharing rhea. always a pleasure.

kena

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Rhea, this is beautiful! I can imagine it just how it's written. Such a subtle, yet descriptive vision. Makes you yearn to be there too, doesn't it? And yet, I think this small glimpse can only do a fraction of the justice of the beauty that it will encompass. Lovely write. Thanks for sharing this intimate vision. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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RHEA CROSLEY

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