Don't you care?

Don't you care?

A Poem by Sabriel09

Came up with this after my mom and dad got divorced, hope you like it!


I have been beaten and misused,

Don't you care?

I have been punished without care,

Don't you care?

 I have been hurting since you left,

Don't you care?

I cry myself to sleep,

Don't you care?

I have taken a blade to this wrist,

Don't you care?

No you do not care!

You left without a word!

You never returned my calls!

I haven't seen or heard from you since you left!

Don't say you care,

Because you DON'T care at all! 

© 2009 Sabriel09

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems, What do you think?

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Posted 13 Years Ago

A good poem. Starts off in the middle and gives rise to an emphatic ending. Sadly, the lack of a more gentler beginning does not help you. I feel as if these words are thrust at my face rather than tugging at my heart. But it does get the message across . . .

Posted 13 Years Ago

Wow! Such a deep emotional write here.
You expressed your feelings well in this powerful write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Powerful and to the point. Something in a life we will never understand. Take time and luck to find peace in a life. A excellent poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago

awesome poem it remines me of rukia too oh and i also love the pic of rukia

Posted 13 Years Ago

Very emotional(obviously). I like it ^_^ btw I like the pic of Rukia :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago

sad ..... but its good... keep writing.. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on December 7, 2009
Last Updated on December 7, 2009



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