Help me...?

Help me...?

A Poem by Sabrina Demartini

Im trying to make everyone around me happy.
While Im hurting and hiding inside.
When will it be my turn to be happy?
Im trying to fit in,
But Im just an outsider.
Should I come out?
Should I keep hiding?
Is the burning going to stop?
Or will I have to suffer longer?
What am I going to do?
help me...?

© 2011 Sabrina Demartini


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Nicely written piece. You seem to cry out to the world through this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a disturbing poem to me, because whenever I see what appears to be a cry for help, I worry that no one will answer. So I guess I am sort of answering here. First ... the poem was VERY visceral and gave me a feeling of grave concern. So the poem was well-written.

As far as the cry in the words ... remember how incredibly short a week or a month or a year is when compared to an entire life. Know that times change and things get better, and it all happens in what seems like the blink of an eye.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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