I try

I try

A Poem by Sabrina Demartini

I try to make it through my life

my way

I try to make it through these lies

wondering why

 

If I was dead or still alive

would you care

If I was lying in a ditch

would you help me

 

I try to fly

but Im crashing down

I try to run

but I keep triping

 

I try to open my eyes

but their wired shut

because of you

 

I try to yell for help

but my mouth is sewed shut

because of you

 

I try to make it through my life

wondering why you where in it

© 2011 Sabrina Demartini


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i like this mainly the first part good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


You said it all in the very last lines

Nice work!!

Really great piece


Orlando Murcia


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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in a dark corner dieing, CA



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