PAINFUL LOVE - II

PAINFUL LOVE - II

A Poem by Saddam

 

girl

 

I

O Dear! O Dear!

It's give me dead tear.

Every word, which I exhibit is too much less

For myself, I am a major distress

My face is not reduce my sorrow

My smile comes like an arrow

Sad today, there's no happy tomorrow

I can see dead way clear.

 

II

O God! O God!

Why I face the sun; Lord?

I am totally wreck

My strength is not to take too rack

God; Hell's fire is much accessible

People's joy is not audible

Dead is fare irrevocable

When I run after to the old.

 

III

O God! O God!

See this forcible odd.

I have not patient to take this grief

But; God; I have incredible belief

I reject your life without sweetheart

PAINFUL LOVE give hurt

Death with all my heart

Let my book fold.

© 2014 Saddam


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Painful Love, is a great written piece that was created from deep within you, which I greatly admire about you ! The flow is well developed and eases with the concept. The meaning within this poem makes me and the others to think hard and long, which is the goal of a poet ....to drill your words into our brains to think later on! Thank You for sharing !

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

5 Years Ago

Well said dear.....thank you for giving it you precious time and your words.



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Deep pain and meaning… .

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend....
MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

YVW :D
An emotional and deep write, nice read

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

4 Years Ago

Glad to know that. Thank you so much...
O God! O God!
Why I face the sun; Lord?
I am totally wreck
My strength is not to take too rack
God; Hell's fire is much accessible
People's joy is not audible
Dead is fare irrevocable
When I run after to the old...very true dear..great job..


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend. Glad you like it.
I like this poem, it's quite meaningful and I like the way it was composed. The whole piece of work is well written! :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet and dear friend.
A piece right from your heart that strikes the reader right from the first line. Great work :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear, It is those emotions of my early days when I fall in my first.........
A deep and emotional write! Great flow saddam :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Saddam

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear.
The girl's confession is really touching.

But i don't want her to jump from the window. :P

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

4 Years Ago

I also think so. Thank you so much dear friend.
that was very heartfelt, and many can relate to it.i loved how you wrote this,
keep it up :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

4 Years Ago

Thank you dear.
A very beautiful and original piece my dear. Excellent work :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Saddam

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
It's so tragic that all this built up pain is soon sequestered into resignation. You are so right. Love can hurt so badly.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear, it means tons for me.

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Saddam
Saddam

RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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