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PAINFUL LOVE - II

PAINFUL LOVE - II

A Poem by Saddam

 

girl

 

I

O Dear! O Dear!

It's give me dead tear.

Every word, which I exhibit is too much less

For myself, I am a major distress

My face is not reduce my sorrow

My smile comes like an arrow

Sad today, there's no happy tomorrow

I can see dead way clear.

 

II

O God! O God!

Why I face the sun; Lord?

I am totally wreck

My strength is not to take too rack

God; Hell's fire is much accessible

People's joy is not audible

Dead is fare irrevocable

When I run after to the old.

 

III

O God! O God!

See this forcible odd.

I have not patient to take this grief

But; God; I have incredible belief

I reject your life without sweetheart

PAINFUL LOVE give hurt

Death with all my heart

Let my book fold.

© 2014 Saddam


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Painful Love, is a great written piece that was created from deep within you, which I greatly admire about you ! The flow is well developed and eases with the concept. The meaning within this poem makes me and the others to think hard and long, which is the goal of a poet ....to drill your words into our brains to think later on! Thank You for sharing !

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Well said dear.....thank you for giving it you precious time and your words.



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this was nice :) I liked it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
intense emotive write. Simple words , yet so deep.
Loved it :)
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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
Indeed, again that old world feel creeps through, well done, a great read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

thank you dear friend.
This is deep.

God; Hell's fire is much accessible
People's joy is not audible
Dead is fare irrevocable
When I run after to the old.

I really liked this concept. Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

thank you dear, sweet friend. love you.
Painful Love, is a great written piece that was created from deep within you, which I greatly admire about you ! The flow is well developed and eases with the concept. The meaning within this poem makes me and the others to think hard and long, which is the goal of a poet ....to drill your words into our brains to think later on! Thank You for sharing !

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Well said dear.....thank you for giving it you precious time and your words.
Painful love indeed and read...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Nice sir.... thanks.
like the way you put it up !!!
really good!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

thank you dear friend
This portrays a lot of emotion Ssadd.It is very nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear poetess a big thanks!
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome :)
I like the form , the poem and the meanings in this wonderful write. You have done a good job on this ...Pen on...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

10 Years Ago

Thank you sir......
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome , sir...:).............

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Added on January 23, 2014
Last Updated on January 30, 2014
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Saddam
Saddam

RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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