A SACRED BOND OF HEARTS

A SACRED BOND OF HEARTS

A Poem by Saddam
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A collaboration with very beautiful and intelligent and helpful writer Dale(Confuser)

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A Sacred Bond of Hearts

 

A sacred relationship between two

A holy bond of faith and truth

Revered and Strong together life long

A belief that never ends with strife

This is the devotion of our life

For infinity + infinity we will be

Loving constant hearts in sync

O dear, this vow we will keep

Forever together our belief

We make a home of joy and happiness

Like a warm fire, gently tended together

United, we are one not two

For eternity our commitment stirs

For that’s our unquestioning binding word,

Our life immortal with promises from above

Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn

It’s our destiny and what we deserve

Together forever our love will remain strong

Happiness and joy will be lifelong.

15/05/2015

 ©2015 Dale and Saddam

© 2015 Saddam


Author's Note

Saddam
It was really fun dear Dale. Thanks for this Dale.
All Rate-Reviews welcomes.

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I commented this one at Dale's profile also.
Nice collaboratio.

I specifically like this part.
We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two

Just tells allot where these two are emotionally.

Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear...



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The idea of Infinity was fabulous

Posted 8 Years Ago


A very good write Saddam... i liked its flow... the way you have presented your thoughts... good one...

Posted 8 Years Ago


What an uplifting and happy write.....reading this makes me really believe all will be well no matter what comes next. Beyond lovely dear author ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This one is a nice collab Saddam. Tryst and ethos of love beautifully covered. Congratulate both of you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
Wow, amazing it was like sailing into the ship of love....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear. Your profile picture I like most.
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

Welcome friend & Thanks!
I enjoyed reading this. You could tell it was very heartfelt. It flows very well. Powerful stuff

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend. Same credit going to Dale. She is so amazing.
Beautiful and lovely poem. I love it! ^^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
This is absolutely beautiful!!!! You are both talented and your devotion to the art of writing shines through!!
A Sacred Bond of Hearts is just that - SACRED!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear. So warm told its your. Dale is great writer.
I love this line "Our life immortal with promises from above". A deep connection between two that makes them one, a powerful theme in this one. This is truly a beautiful collaboration. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend. It is great you like it.
It’s our destiny and what we deserve
Together forever our love will remain strong
Happiness and joy will be lifelong...beauty...:))

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear for this lovely review.

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