A SACRED BOND OF HEARTS

A collaboration with very beautiful and intelligent and helpful writer Dale(Confuser)

A Sacred Bond of Hearts

 

A sacred relationship between two

A holy bond of faith and truth

Revered and Strong together life long

A belief that never ends with strife

This is the devotion of our life

For infinity + infinity we will be

Loving constant hearts in sync

O dear, this vow we will keep

Forever together our belief

We make a home of joy and happiness

Like a warm fire, gently tended together

United, we are one not two

For eternity our commitment stirs

For that’s our unquestioning binding word,

Our life immortal with promises from above

Veiled devotion exposed every twilight & dawn

It’s our destiny and what we deserve

Together forever our love will remain strong

Happiness and joy will be lifelong.

15/05/2015

 ©2015 Dale and Saddam

Author's Note

It was really fun dear Dale. Thanks for this Dale.
All Rate-Reviews welcomes.

Reviews

[Ronny]

I commented this one at Dale's profile also.
Nice collaboratio.

I specifically like this part.
We make a home of joy and happiness
Like a warm fire, gently tended together
United, we are one not two

Just tells allot where these two are emotionally.

Thanks for sharing :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear...

[prajakta]

very beautiful..thanks for sharing saddam and dale:-)

[Saddam]

Welcome friend....

[Julia Mars]

Well done to both. It cannot be easy to collaborate and yet you made it seem so effortless.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear, Dale's contribution made it fun, she is amazing.

[Julia Mars]

My pleasure!?

[Daydreamer]

Nothing can destroy what the creator has implanted within the hearts of two lovers, through the ripples of time they reach out to touch one another, hoping for the moment to come home...Beautiful delivery!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear, It was Dale who made it beautifully.

[MomzillaNC]

Beautiful sentiments. A very moving collaborative poem.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for this lovely compliment...

[MomzillaNC]

YVW :D

[Mitali Shah]

good work Saddam and Dale. Good bless :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear...

[nazia]

Awesome work.. this is a perfect serene piece. Though I read it first on Dale's page, I liked the effort the two of you did put in here.. Well done my friend :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear, It was nice to collab with Dale. She is amazing writer.

[AaronFreitas]

This is an awesome collaboration my friends... collaborations I am sure are not easy but a beautiful piece come from this one. Good work!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much friend. It was a very fun writing with Dale.

[Confuser]

Saddam: Look our beautiful you made it. It sours...it roars. You are so talented. Thanks so much!!!!!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much sweetie...

[Chirag Kumar]

such a sweet poem. Loved it saddam :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.