YOU ARE MY PERFECTION

YOU ARE MY PERFECTION

 

Awara, I am

But I am loyal

Into your love

For dreams, we have dreamt.

Banjara, I am

But I am sensible

For our bonds

Promises, we have made.

Deewana, I am

But I am passionate

About our relationship

I want to build happiness extreme.

No matter what the world saying

But I am complete with you.

 

SADDAM HUSEN

06/06/2015

©saddamhusen2015

Reviews

[Hi]

I was grateful to have the translations down below in your comments. The essence of this piece is beautiful and the structure is good. Thanks. I might reword some of the English, but the point certainly comes across so maybe it's better left alone. Thanks.

[Avinash]

Your sincerity pour through your words. That tells everything about love.

[Ruth]

Love is the bridge to soul happiness and fulfillment, precious piece :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Amazing work brother. The meeting of two beautiful languages. :)

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot bro.
I'm glad you like it.

[Deepika]

Nice blend of languages:) Keep up good work!

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for this lovely comment and encouragement.

[~]

A sincere write. I feel the poem will make more sense if you translated in author's notes the meaning of some of these words.
just a thought. :D

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for reading it.
Those words means
Awara= Crazy
Banjara= Wanderer
Dewana= mad in love.

[~]

:) ahh, thank you :D

[Elisa]

I love the last line: But I am complete with you. This would be a lovely gift for that special someone

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend,
I am so much glad.

[For Who I Am]

wow, u took expressing to a whole new level.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.

[Mitali Shah]

Cool poem Saddam. Something new n refreshing.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.
I'm pleased..

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

What a way to express your feelings for your love...Absolutely stunning!

[Saddam]

So much pleased hear that friend.
I'm so happy that you like it.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend