Your Eyes.

Your Eyes.

A Poem by Meenakshi Dutta

Everytime I looked into your eyes, I found something divergent, something dark, something to yearn for,
Yet the fascinating thing was that intimacy, warmth in your eyes.
I may not delve deeper into your eyes again, but doesn't matter, I'm already lost deep in the limbus of your eyes, perplexed.
Does that mean that I want to come to light ?
No, no.
That's my peaceful place. I would love to stay zillion years, if you permit, my love. �'�

© 2021 Meenakshi Dutta


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Author's Note

Meenakshi Dutta
Pls do share ur feedback. As it's my first writing.

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They say the eyes are the window to the soul, and who is to argue with that? Getting lost in a beautiful pair of eyes is pleasure and a privilege, I would say. A warmly written poetic piece.

Posted 4 Months Ago




the eyes have it don't they just .. the gateway to the soul .. and where would we be, other than lost without them .. well poemed my friend and muchly enjoyed :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meenakshi Dutta

1 Year Ago

Thank you Nev,, for lovely review.
Best,
S
Neville

1 Year Ago


welcome as always .. always a pleasure & always mine :)
the eyes seem
to always tell the
story deep within
this is so nicely
penned

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meenakshi Dutta

1 Year Ago

Thanku Fran for checking in!
Best wishes
Saga
nicely done
I guess the reality is that with these masks everyone is wearing, there is little else to look into

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meenakshi Dutta

1 Year Ago

Rightly said by u Dave. Atleast eyes give those vibe, u cannot deny completely
Thanks for tak.. read more
It:s all in the eyes. The mirrors of the soul. You can tell a great deal about someone by looking directly into their eyes. That's if you dare. Nice little read.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meenakshi Dutta

1 Year Ago

Yes, that's right. As they say, eyes say it all.
Thanku for reading, this is my first ever w.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Now you have started, you just have to keep going:) Good luck.
The eyes can be so expressive that it’s the first thing one delves into
And desires to stay forever, very nice write
Best
Betty



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meenakshi Dutta

1 Year Ago

Thanku for the review.
Much love
Be careful. A zillion years can end suddenly in one bad weekend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Meenakshi Dutta

1 Year Ago

That's right sir,
Perception is a big thing, what we may call a zillion years, might be a we.. read more

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Meenakshi Dutta
Meenakshi Dutta

Jammu & kashmir, India



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