Beginning & End

It all began with the mutual gaze & mysterious smile.
And as they say, it was the beginning of end.
Laying on my couch with restless heart and messy room, I couldn't contemplate, why my mind was awestruck in the idea of you.
I was stuck in something that lasted a split second(however felt like infinity)
Now, sitting under the radiant sky,
I've visions of your hazel eyes and smiling face, with the sweet breeze touching it softly.
The idea of you sends shivers down my spine. Damn!!

Your's affectionately.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

That's all it takes a simple look, a connection. A split second and you can think, I want to know that person more. 'The idea of you sends shivers down my spine'. Nicely conveyed poem of attraction Saga. It can be so magnetic.

Chris

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Hey chris, thank you for checking in.
Yes, sometimes split second does it's job.
Bless ya:)
Saga

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.

[Betty Hermelee]

As they say the”eyes” have it all, ; was is this real or imagined? In any case, a lovely write about daydreaming the beauty of what catches your glimpse.
Best. B.

[Betty Hermelee]

Welcome to Writers Cafe!

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thanku dear Betty,
It's a amalgamation of my imagination and some real incidents.
I've read some of your work, and i would say, Betty, can't beat u in imagination stuff,.
Best wishes.
Saga

[Betty Hermelee]

Oh yes you can !😊

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

attraction is the skin that covers love. This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing your words.

[Meenakshi Dutta]

I am humbled , thanku for sharing the review.
I am a new writer on board. So, I really appreciate the love.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Welcome to this community of fine writers. I myself am some what new as well, but I have received nothing but kindness and encouragement here. Feel free to submit, review, and reach out to other like minded artists here if you feel moved too. We all share a love for story, and poetry.

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thanku so so much,
Much love and light to you💫💞