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Big Brother

Big Brother

A Poem by Sagela

I've liked you since I met you

I've laughed at all your jokes

I've blushed when you teased me

And you thought it was cute.

I don't know why we didn't go out

Way back in high school

But it was probably for the best.

But now you have a girlfriend

Who you claim you love

But you complain about to me.

Then you come to visit

From your house oh so far away.

And your friend offers to let you hang out with him

But you want to hang out with me

And you want to watch the stars with me

How did you know

That I love that?

You didn't.

You just love it too.

Then I showed you the truth

Of how much you really love your girlfriend.

I proved to you what I have been trying to tell you all along

And you finally agree.

And you and I both agree

That we both wish we dated in high school

Instead of you becoming my big brother.

© 2009 Sagela


Author's Note

Sagela
I still need to add the grammar to this.

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Sage!
What a Wonderful and Powerful piece.

Sorry for not reviewing you're previous works but I've just been loaded with work and various other nonsense haha..

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very simple and sweet.
Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sweet. Very sweet. Yet, somehow sour as well. I loved the ending. And I loved the emotion as well. Because, the only thing you really need to make a piece really shine, is some feeling. And you put a lot of feeling into this. And for that, I commend you. A job very well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh wow, I most certainly was not expecting the ending. Tragic, ironic, something that's so bad, it's so good. Brilliant.

Posted 9 Years Ago


awwwwww! regret. i love how you put your feelings into this poem. sometimes you cant tell that person what your feelings are. :( sad, but i loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a beautiful look inside the most precious friendship. I loved the honesty and insights, and you so vividly express this in the most tender way... Wonderful write!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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