You are a very talented writer indeed.
All your writing have really awesome story lines that leave the readers wanting more.
This story was great, meaning behind it, the few rhymes, the emotion everything was great.
All comes together really well.
Keep writing :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Aw, thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks, again, for your heartfelt review, Cimmy :.. read moreAw, thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks, again, for your heartfelt review, Cimmy :)
8 Years Ago
Your welcome no worries. I really love your poetry :)
You are a very talented writer indeed.
All your writing have really awesome story lines that leave the readers wanting more.
This story was great, meaning behind it, the few rhymes, the emotion everything was great.
All comes together really well.
Keep writing :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Aw, thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks, again, for your heartfelt review, Cimmy :.. read moreAw, thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks, again, for your heartfelt review, Cimmy :)
8 Years Ago
Your welcome no worries. I really love your poetry :)
Unfortunately, I have not seen Artificial Intelligence, so I can't relate to your poem in this way. I was, however, impressed with both the style and the sentiment behind it, simply as a response to loneliness and/or rejection. The repetitive last line openings with the subtle changes served to heighten the pathos.
Moving and compelling to read. Thank you.
Norman
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. Your review is really helpful, and I appreciate .. read moreThank you so much for taking the time to read this. Your review is really helpful, and I appreciate it.
What a brilliant, wildly living glimpse at life and existence in a world that so seldom feels like home. Could feel myself there, could relate so well to the boy seeking the way, the acceptance, the love. Your words are tender and stirring. And ah, AI... good for inspiration to be sure. :)
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for that wonderful review! It really means a lot that you took the time to read th.. read moreThank you so much for that wonderful review! It really means a lot that you took the time to read this.
Great description made the story come alive. Artwork came alive and you create situation and vision for the reader to think about. Thank you Sally for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
This story is spellbinding and the verse so well written I was a willing captive from start to finish. Bravo! ~Sharon
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind words, Sharon. It really means a lot that you took the time to read .. read moreThank you so much for your kind words, Sharon. It really means a lot that you took the time to read this.
This is beautiful, it's rhythm is perfect and it reads like a dream. I love the story being told it holds so much melancholy and at the same time it made me think hard about many things. I know it's not connected but this actually made me think of the migrant crisis and all the children that get lost or left behind or taken. It made me sad but almost in a good way because it has a hopeful ending that no matter how far it is there is a light at the end. Absolutely brilliant, love it X
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the beautiful review, BlaqkShadow. I'm glad you saw the poem this way, and tha.. read moreThank you so much for the beautiful review, BlaqkShadow. I'm glad you saw the poem this way, and that you took the time to read it. Truly, means a lot.
I really liked this. I think it can have many different meanings, depending on the thoughts of the reader. I think, possibly, from an adult's point of view it could having that longing to go back to childhood -- to simpler days. Wanting to return to the childhood home but, as we all know, we are unable to do that because of responsibilities, careers, etc. It could have meaning for a child in foster care - wanting to be adopted and feeling like no one cares. I think a piece like this, with different meanings is the sign of a good writer. Very well done. (Love the picture too!)
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for that wonderful review, Melissa! It truly means a lot that you took the time to.. read moreThank you so much for that wonderful review, Melissa! It truly means a lot that you took the time to read this.