My Innocent Soul

My Innocent Soul

A Poem by Maan
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She wanted to experience the world and I gave her chance to have a look..

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When the sun goes down
my soul comes back to me,
after wandering whole day,
it silently comes back to me

there's light,
there's dark,
and there's always something
which I can't know

when it leaves,
it leaves with full vitality
and comes back powerless,
like she's mugged by the world

we used to be felicitous,
till the day she wanted new
something new
like I wasn't enough

I was enough
now she says
and that is all
she wishes to say

one morning she didn't leave,
I asked the reason,
she mumbled something,
something that I didn't get

I asked again,
and there was silence,
a horrible silence,
and I knew what has happened

I  brought her out and
took her in my arms,
she was dead,
bleeding wounds were all that left

a single tear,
which I kept for her
fell on her face
absorbed in her pure skin

I hugged her lost
and slept deep
I woke up with her breaths
touching my face

I smiled and held her more,
when the sun went down
we sat alone at the rooftop
just two of us

she told me all what she saw
I told her that I know
she told me that you're right
and i just smile. .

© 2012 Maan


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Author's Note

Maan
I kept her safe when I was being through everything, every pain, every scream and everything that can break her inside and I told her everything, my every experience when I went back to her but she wished to experience, I should had stop her, I shouldn't had let her go but I didn't wanna stop either. It was painful but now she knows, that I wasn't wrong about anything I told. ..

Mistakes are painful but sometimes we have to do big mistakes, just to realize the way to make things better. .

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I like this, you are excellent at expressing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You expressed so much love and pain here. I liked the solid foundation underneath all the confusion. The writing had some issues that would be a simple matter to clean up, but the artistry is there. Enjoyed the read!
Be well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thats an incredible poem, Maan. I loved every word of it, So deep! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is so passionate in emotion. You penned it true to yourself and allowed us to share in your journey..xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


The bond between two souls grows ever stronger through hard times. Life is hard, but harden we will. Nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on November 1, 2012
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Maan
Maan

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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Not really much to say about what I am or anything about me. Its like I've never find myself in the spheres of something and something not, I always wander somewhere in between them, all I get is the .. more..

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