Your Poems Breathe

Your Poems Breathe

A Poem by Sammi
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Dedicated to Light and her amazing living poems. This poem is written in quatrain form with eight syllables each line and abcb, defe, etc rhyming.

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© 2018 Sammi


Author's Note

Sammi
I got the picture off of Google Images.
Thanks to my poetry teacher Richard for helping me with this one. :)

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Honestly dear Sammi, when You said that You will write a poem with the title (Your Poems Breathe) it never crossed my mind that You actually would write something for/about mine, so I'm happily amazed right now, You understand, right?

the presentation I so love, and I'm pleased it's in quatrain form, I seem to write only with one style, so it makes me feel more special that it's not in the only style I write with, beside, it flows so smoothly, so gently, kindly and warm, Your lovely and thoughtful heart, Your knack and insight are there in each of Your word choices, in Your "butterfly" photo too, I just wish I did have her big eyes :)

for me, to be dedicated just the title overwhelming my poetic spirit, now how it's if a whole poem? now, how can I reward You dear Sammi?

Thank You, for glowing my day with the sparks of Your beautiful kindness.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sammi

3 Years Ago

Light when I feel someone's heart and beautiful self like I do yours nothing is too good for you and.. read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

there is no precious diamond than the gem of a "heart", and You've poured Your heart dear Sammi, so .. read more
Sammi

3 Years Ago

Aw Light you make my eyes brim over -- love! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi



Reviews

This is a beautifully written poem. Your title is striking & the poem supports your premise by showing us what it feels like when poems come alive. Any poet would love to have someone say all this to them. Happy Easter! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


This is ever so lovely, So beautiful. So very poetic. Enjoyed the read


Posted 1 Year Ago


This is so very lovely,a wonderful write here

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sammi! This is wonderful!!! Such a beautiful piece and such a lovely gesture! Im sure it was very appreciated. :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sammi

3 Years Ago

Golly Susan my ideal poetess you sure know how to make a gal smile all over with those sweet words o.. read more
Honestly dear Sammi, when You said that You will write a poem with the title (Your Poems Breathe) it never crossed my mind that You actually would write something for/about mine, so I'm happily amazed right now, You understand, right?

the presentation I so love, and I'm pleased it's in quatrain form, I seem to write only with one style, so it makes me feel more special that it's not in the only style I write with, beside, it flows so smoothly, so gently, kindly and warm, Your lovely and thoughtful heart, Your knack and insight are there in each of Your word choices, in Your "butterfly" photo too, I just wish I did have her big eyes :)

for me, to be dedicated just the title overwhelming my poetic spirit, now how it's if a whole poem? now, how can I reward You dear Sammi?

Thank You, for glowing my day with the sparks of Your beautiful kindness.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sammi

3 Years Ago

Light when I feel someone's heart and beautiful self like I do yours nothing is too good for you and.. read more
lightsong

3 Years Ago

there is no precious diamond than the gem of a "heart", and You've poured Your heart dear Sammi, so .. read more
Sammi

3 Years Ago

Aw Light you make my eyes brim over -- love! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi
Richard is such an amazing teacher to have. Each verse of the poem is crafted so finely and is an embodiment of the love and appreciation felt for a poet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sammi

3 Years Ago

I'm going to tell Richard you said that DIVYA lol, yes I do feel a lot of love for Light and so many.. read more
Beautiful and wonderful use of words and thoughts. The words alive, gentle and true. I wanted more. Thank you Sammi for sharing the amazing poetry. Great poetry suppose to make us wander and wonder.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sammi

3 Years Ago

Golly Coyote you say the nicest things to me that warm my heart and make me feel like a real poetess.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are a real poetess and you are welcome Sammi.

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