Lost track

lost track,

Can't find it back.

where did it go?

no where to be found.

its all dark,

even with an eyes opened.

been a while now,

wandering , confined but with no thoughts.

lost track,

when are you coming back?

without you, its not the same.

everything's falling upon me.

you were gone,

left without a sigh.

Now need you so bad.

lost track.

how long do you want me to wait?

its already a long break.

do this poor guy a favour,

Come back soon,

And i will be yours forever.

I am sorry, 

I'll take the blame,

I'll never make you upset again.

Lost track,

all of me wants you back.

lighten my loads,

light the darkness,

let me shine,

with the rays of yours.

with you i am ME.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Losing someone hurts to the bone. Sadness lingers too long. Valentine

[Rinzin Samdup]

its surely does. And losing the track of what you have been doing sucks a big time.

[R Smith]

fine poem Rinzin, certainly a plea from the heart, always a valuable asset to us writers, being able to turn our negative situations into positive poetry, well done my friend :)

[Rinzin Samdup]

thank you lots Richard :) it is nice of you to say good words.