The Milky way!

Been awhile,

No lines.

No words on my mind.

Accepted its cease.

knowing it will begin.

HOW HAVE YOU ALL BEEN?

with this, let me begin.

It was a calm night.

Breeze blowing right.

A chance i'll never miss.

Laid back on my back.

On wet green grasses.

I whisperd 'Sorry, didnt mean to hurt'

it understood this soul.

Waved it's tiny hand,

A sign of forgiveness.

Appeneded with a smile.

It let me be with a seductive vast sky.

Eyes bulging,

Trying to find,

The brightest of all.

counting it in a whirlpool.

It is flirty, all of them.

Everytime i look at it,

it gives a WINK.

A wink i'll not forget.

A playful night,

i'm coy.

Winks win me over.

How beautiful it is.

A serene sky,

dressed with the twinkling flirty stars.

 

The Milky way!

Reviews

[Sasheera Gounden]

"dressed with twinkling flirty stars"- love that line.

[1VJ]

The Milky Way is mesmerizing, really liked 'winks win me over', I can picture them twinkling, well done.

[Valentine]

On a clear nigh, stars in the sky, one feels that they can see forever. Valentine

[Arline]

A sweet piece that's serene and dazzling. Nice work!

[R Smith]

a beautiful sight in the night sky for sure Rinzin, well said my friend :)

[Willard Wells]

Nice read of star gazing and the feeling and thoughts as you watch the sky.

[Rinzin Samdup]

it was seductive night though :) thanx for the read