Bleed

Bleed

A Poem by Sam

So you pursue
Someone for weeks
Get cast aside
And then he hooks up with someone
I've had before.
A boy I dismissed as trash.
Too young, too keen,
I would have broken his lavender heart.


So now they're together,
And yes I've sampled both,
I put the first down like a sick dog,
But the other
I wanted more.

He raped my thoughts everyday.

I don't know why I bother with matters
Of the heart,
Because I become a pathetic retard.
So boys,
I hope it works out
And you bleed eachother dry
You've saved me the trouble.

© 2008 Sam


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I hope it works out
And you bleed eachother dry
You've saved me the trouble.

WOW good for you, thats the attitude baby!!! couldn't have wished for a better ending... you and love oh how I am loving reading about you and love... your view of it so pure venerable so unabashedly raw and naked yet just a little protected in that you are feeling it and writing it but you are keeping those emotions for the paper and ink and not for the human heart and word exchange so that any of your lovers, past or otherwise would ever know just how deep you feel... I think it is more brave of you to write it down than to waste your time giving or showing more of your heart to boys who will only discard it or not care the way you deserve to be cared for... oddly as opposite as we are it seems, you have become one of my favorites to read on here I have a dark side and I think that your pieces feel at home to me... lets b friends love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I hope it works out
And you bleed eachother dry
You've saved me the trouble.

WOW good for you, thats the attitude baby!!! couldn't have wished for a better ending... you and love oh how I am loving reading about you and love... your view of it so pure venerable so unabashedly raw and naked yet just a little protected in that you are feeling it and writing it but you are keeping those emotions for the paper and ink and not for the human heart and word exchange so that any of your lovers, past or otherwise would ever know just how deep you feel... I think it is more brave of you to write it down than to waste your time giving or showing more of your heart to boys who will only discard it or not care the way you deserve to be cared for... oddly as opposite as we are it seems, you have become one of my favorites to read on here I have a dark side and I think that your pieces feel at home to me... lets b friends love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW!! this poem really calls for "kudos to you" it was an awesome thought process framed in a poem.. i really enjoyed the read...

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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