Enraptured Soul

Thought I'd attempt Shakespearian tongue... He definitely knew the language to express heartbreak.

Enraptured Soul

Thou art thy most eternal love.

Unknowing

thou has enraptured my soul.

And although thou is but unaware

of the Longing

In mine eye;

It is there.

 

Stay in comfort,

Beloved,

For thee will never be

Alone;

Even in this

world

Where we never meet.

 

Unaware of mine love,

One might never

have met

Your true heart.

Thou dost have mine

For all the Sun’s

life.

 

From afar I am but

a gust

In this stormy life

For I know

Another contains your heart.

Scents of memories

Only surround me now.

 

Beloved,

I travel back

to that place

Where thou

Had built

Up

My world.

 

From unseeing eyes

thee,

hast cast a resignation

upon me.

Now the moon

dost see my

bared soul.

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Setting a beloved free...beautifully written and peaceful.

[SamanthaSweeney]

Thank you :) I treasure people's comments ! So comforting to know others can understand the message behind my writing :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Beloved,
I travel back
to that place
Where thou
Had built
Up
My world.

From unseeing eyes."
That is some good poetry...Thank you for sharing...:)

[SamanthaSweeney]

Thank you !
Glad you appreciate my writing and took the time to review. Means a lot :D

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure . Any time. I will visit from now and then...:)

[SamanthaSweeney]

Thank you, and I you :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)