Life

Life is a manifestation of self.

Life

I guess I am standing alone

As time passes by

I tried to hold on things

I love,

They went passed by…

But they now look different

Then before,

I don’t know, what future got for me.

I shed the skin of my old self

As I look within my core

I never stopped I walked by

Those doors. Which waited and

Longed for me.

Are lost in dreams, which made me a star.

The threshold of success

No more inspires me

I wait for something to grow

Within me

As I wait for the destiny to tell me

What she has in store.

Does life is made by us or is already made for us…

If ….I am making it right or wrong

Who knows?

By

Sameer Tembe

 

 

Author's Note

Thanks for Reviews

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i agree with softlyfall...i don't think there is right or wrong...we just have decisions we make in life---and do the best with them...life happens, and time passes...and we don't get do-overs...but we also can't spend all our time beating ourselves up for decisions we have made...we just need to know we have done the best we can.

[softlyfall]

There is no wrong, there is no right. There is no past, there is no future.
Don't try to hold onto anything, it will disappear all the faster.
And nothing you CAN hold in your hands is really worth holding onto anyway.
Great poem with heartfelt thoughts.

[sereenaoutloud]

Nice write, is life set out for us or do we choose our own path? i like to believe its a little of both, that is meant for us will not pass us by , but it will not come knocking you have to go out and seize the day!