Have you ever felt that pain?

Do you ever get that feeling?

When you know someones walking away?

Not the ones you'll see again

Or talk to in the near future

I mean the ones,

That you're letting go.

The ones that love you,

and hold you,

and carry you through the shadow

The ones that care,

the ones that give you hugs

the ones that treat you fair

Have you ever felt that pain?

Its an ice cold hurt.

Chills you to the bone.

It slips in and out

Unwilling to give up.

Kile of like when your alone.

Only worse?...

Possibly...

Beacause you know its true

And you dont want to let them go,

Especiallythose that used to love you.

Have you ever felt that pain?

Hopefully not...

No one deserves that...

They deserve to dance in the rain

Surrounded by hope...love... friendship....

But wait...

Do they?

Do they really?

Yes...They do....

But do I?....

Yes...No...Maybe?

No....

I've hurt too many.

Ive made too many mistakes.

Ive pushed them away....

Or not?...

They probably didnt want me to stay.

Did they?

Maybe...Yes...No?

No....

And theyve felt that pain...

Maybe not for me,

But they have...

Havent they?

Have you ever felt that pain?

Its like... No...

You'd wish

that it was a knife

Straight through your already shattered heart.

But you know what?

Thats not the worst part...

So... really think...

Its not something you forget...

Have you ever felt that pain?

No...Maybe...Yes?

Author's Note

i wrote this when i was really sad...... enjoy

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Don't feel so bad, it happens to everyone. It's just that...our close friends tend to often test us or "provoke" us. You know, if you're not close to someone, then you don't notice those tiny little flaws....and when you become close to them, then you start noticing, and the problem appears if either of you start making a big deal out of it. You ask yourself "Why does he always act that way when *whatever the situation is*?" So freaking out because of that might give you the impression that they don't want you around.
So, trust in yourself, forgive yourself for any mistakes you've done, but also do that for the people close to you.
I like the poem, but I think it lacks rhythm. The whole monologue thing is good, but that types of poem are in need of some rhyming, I'd say.

[Taylor Jade]

I love how simply honest this is. I really like this, good job :)

[Meagan]

is this about ginger?

[Daniel]

well i can't exactly say i've felt like that considering i've always isolated myself but that type of pain sounds horrible no one deserves that meaning you so hopefully you'll feel better :) like your poem.

[Angelic Surrender]

I know the feeling. And I hate it. I hope you feel better. Great poem.

[quarintine_deathangel]

I've had that happen twice before at least. I looked into different ideas of how to make the pain less or fix it.. best way is to remember the good, forgive the bad and make the next day as good as it can get, don't let the weight of the world make your shoulders it's shelf and don't forget what you've lived, there's virtue in the bad and good that comes out of it. Really well written though, the emotion is really clear. sry you felt that bad (/(0.0))

[Marie]

Everyone has felt that pain. You're clouded this poem's meaning with too many repeated words.