Break thorugh the Shadows

Break thorugh the Shadows

A Poem by xSamilynnx

The shadows choke down whats left of the light
I need to get out, fast, I need to fight
The darkness is chasing me, I'm running for the door
Save me, I'm falling, falling to the floor
The shadows are creeping closer, They're gonna get me
If I let them get too close, I'll never be free
The door is in my sight, I'm almost, almost there
Something grabs me, pulls me back, this isn't fair
Im scared, I claw, hit, and scratch
I fall to the ground, waiting for an idea to hatch
My body starts to hurt, I must get out
I'll be alright, I'll get free, right? Im starting to doubt
I give up, I cant fight anymore, I start to weep
A light shines bright, cutting the darkness deep
And......
I'm free

© 2012 xSamilynnx


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The darkness is chasing me.
Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It shows the troubles your going through in life, Very deep. The hardships , the cries out. Very Emotional. Im glad you found that light. Keep moving forward. And dont let things get you down in life. Great write. Thankyou

Posted 7 Years Ago


Extremely well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This poem is pure Greatness

Posted 7 Years Ago


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wow it's like i'm part of the scene... moving piece....

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it, it's pretty neat :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice write i liked it keep up the good work thanks for sharing with me

Posted 7 Years Ago


This reminds me of a nightmare. Everything is so real and there is escape bu you never quiet get there. The only thing that can save you is the morning light.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is really amazing. Such suspense in this poem. I loved it. Very nicely done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I found this poem very easy to read. Nice ending, very sad.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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