knife through the back

if u only knew how much i liked u,

but then u had to go off be some one else.

some one who shoudnt even exxist.

now u hate me and i should hate u 2.

but i cant pull myself to do it.

u know i hate good byes,

and that i never want to say fare well,

but now is the time that i think i have to.

i shoud but i shouldnt,

we should have talked more but now its to late,

cuz i might be in love with some one else,

but the problem is every time i got to think about him i think of u.

so i think it woud be best if i said bye,

and u left my heart for-ever.

(p.s i really cant say goodbye to this person he means to much to me already)

Reviews

[PhantomDancer]

These would make lovely lyrics for a song. The pull of opposing and conflicting emotions, you have written very beautifully.

[Brittney]

sam this is so good! luv it! :)

[mystic soul]

apart from spelling mistake... it's a very powerful one.... serves it's purpose of connecting to reader's heart... great one... i liked it....

[Emily?]

Aww babe, Like i said before. "Any guy would be lucky to have you, and you know it". But I really do love this poem. I love how the words come right out of you, and they are your own words! This is a great way to get your feelings out, and I think you should keep doing it! Great Job, and remember......Always keep writing"! Love ya lots. Emily=)