Show & Tell

Show & Tell

A Poem by Sammie Sanchez
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I'm feeling romantic

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Tell me that my blush is cute
Tell me my hair fall just the right way
Tell me my lips are soft
Tell me my skin is oh so smooth
Tell me my smile is beautiful
And I will show you true beauty 

The harmonies of a laughter
The light of a thousand ideas
The small infinity pools of jade
The curves of a woman
The birth hips of a mother
The scars of a survivor 
The heart of the strong
The voice of the experienced
The memories of the weak

Tell me I am yours
Yours to protect
Yours to hold
Yours to love
Yours to be perfect
Yours to be beautiful
Yours to be forever

© 2017 Sammie Sanchez


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Beautiful sentiments. I would love to see you squeeze out a revision just to get polish on all of the ideas here. The repetition of "yours" as well as "tell me" really give the reader a sense of the longing in the narrator's voice. I appreciate this.

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Beautiful sentiments. I would love to see you squeeze out a revision just to get polish on all of the ideas here. The repetition of "yours" as well as "tell me" really give the reader a sense of the longing in the narrator's voice. I appreciate this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sammie Sanchez
Sammie Sanchez

Waskom, TX



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