Stone Heart

Stone Heart

A Poem by Sean Ethan Torres

somethin i put together after giving a heart shaped crystal to my gf. I told her i gave her wats left of my heart. it was smooth on the outside but flawed on the inside. she holds my heart.

There once was a young man
With a heart carved from stone
This impenetrable shield
Protected him always
From injustice and fear
From pain and doubt
This strong hearted young man
Stood against all
The outside was stone solid
The inside however was breaking
No one was this flaw
His stone walls hid it
The rock hearted youth
Fell deeply in love
And the emotion and passion
Was so over whelming
The his fortress of a heart
Could not contain the erupting force
From inside out
The Stone heart shattered
Angelically glowing in its place
From its crystalline core
A perfect crystal heart
Perfect yet flawed
Smooth on the outside
But crack from the inside out
He gave her his heart
And she holds it always

© 2011 Sean Ethan Torres

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Sean Ethan Torres
Please tell me what you think. did you like it, love it, hate it. Please i want everyones opinions.

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Added on January 22, 2011
Last Updated on February 22, 2011
Tags: stone, heart, crystal, love, faith, cracked


Sean Ethan Torres
Sean Ethan Torres

Tulare, CA

Use to be on a lot but lost password to old account. Link to my old poetry - - ^ about me . . . hmmm thats a very good question. Well I guess i can safely describ.. more..